Final Music Video Feedback

First Student: I liked how you did the rewind on the writing part, and I thought the way you had the same shot in the kitchen showing his life was boring and dull because he was doing the same thing every day was effective. I feel like there could have been more shots of the character appearing sadder, possibly could have framed him sat against a wall with his head in his hands or something similar to that, but editing wise, I can’t find a fault.

Second Student: I found the music video really really emotional because I could understand that you were representing the emotions men feel but aren't praised upon if then need to open up about it. The way the clips fade in between each other worked really well, I got the aspect of time passing because of the cuts between the clips in the kitchen. The narrative could have been slightly clearer but I still understood what you were portraying.

Third Student: The beginning and closing titles were effective and I liked how the blue colour suggested the idea of water which was heavily relevant and represented in the music video. The narrative could have been clearer but I understood the underlying story line. I understood that time was manipulated as the footage was shown in reverse time at the start of the video. And I liked the music as it was highly relevant and certain lyrics were synced to the footage at the right time. I liked the pace of the footage was played at and the order of it. The colours were all very similar like whites, greys and blacks. I especially liked the footage that was overlaid on top of the other pieces of footage.